The feedback on my second elevator pitch, someone commented stating that I should extend this service to those who are disabled as well. I liked this idea, as it did not include other residents who just choose not to go, but those who are unable to do it themselves. Therefore, I added this to my pitch as well as including an ordering service to keep costs down and orders organized.
Tuesday, March 15, 2016
Elevator Pitch No. 3
The feedback on my second elevator pitch, someone commented stating that I should extend this service to those who are disabled as well. I liked this idea, as it did not include other residents who just choose not to go, but those who are unable to do it themselves. Therefore, I added this to my pitch as well as including an ordering service to keep costs down and orders organized.
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This was a great pitch. You have a great idea, and did an excellent job of providing any details that you could within 60 seconds. You also did a great job of incorporating your feedback from your previous post into this one. One small problem was the fact that the lighting was a bit dark, but I know that that can be hard to fix with limited resources. One thing I was wondering was; how much would this service cost beyond the cost of the groceries? Your target audience can be very price sensitive.
ReplyDeleteGreat post! If you want to watch my post you can check it out here: http://greywilliams3.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-no-3.html
Hi Emily,
ReplyDeleteGreat job with the pitch. You spoke very clearly and made it easy to relate to the situation you described. Your business idea is very interesting and feasible; I could see this becoming a successful company. What sort of fee would be associated with the service? Would you work with a specific grocery chain or partner with a single store?
Thanks for sharing! Here's a link to my elevator pitch. http://jamestyrrell.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-number-3-chug.html